Class 3/4 R at Barlow Hall

Welcome to the wonderful world of Year 3/4

The Pirates


As the sun set Captain Red Beard  sailed on his shinney, golden, spick and span ship. Suddenly, Captain Red Beard heard a nosie “YES YES” ! SHOUTED! a pirate but Captain Red Beard did not have a clue who was making all of the noise. But then Captain Red Beard heard “I FOUND A MAP”SHOUTED! a pirate then Captain Red Beard knew who it was, it was Captain Hook his long time menance. He had managed to sneak onto the ship and stolen Captain Red Beard treasure map, unkown to Captain Hook the map was false and ended up in a trapped cave with a massive bear.

Capatain Red Beard pretended that he did not hear Captain Hook shouting. He allowed Captain Hook to jump of the ship and swim back  to his  own ship because it wasn’t very far. Capatain Red Beard laugh and smiled and whisperd ” that will teach him a lesson”.

by: Aysha Marshall 34ar

by posted under Uncategorized | 1 Comment »    
One Comment to

“The Pirates”

  1. June 25th, 2011 at 3:59 pm       34r Says:

    This story is fantastic and i enjoyed it vey much.

    From your Godmother Michelle

Email will not be published

Website example

Your Comment: